First Draft Of My Trailer

Here I have uploaded my very first draft of my trailer. It has taken me several attempts to get things right with it. Before this draft I had tried a variety of different things and the development of it was very weak, a lot needed to be done to it, I need to crop videos, add music, transitions and many other things. I had to add things such as intertitles to help give it that professional effect. Before I got to this first draft I had to edit a lot of things to at least make it half decent. I personally dont like to post things when they are really bad so thats why Ive waited until I can get it as good as this, there is still quite a few things that I need to change on my trailer due to things such as sound balance, the length of intertitles, effects etc. I originally really struggled when it came to finding the correct music to use in my trailer. The music I was originally going to use was first of all too short in length, secondly I originally thought it would go well with all my footage and the story line of my film but when I had put it into imovie it didnt go well at all. This then led to me searching for 2 days for the perfect soundtrack to go with my movie trailer. Due to me struggling to get permission to use the music I have I have edited the pitch slightly in audacity so it's legal to use in my trailer. Due to this being my first draft I am going to go back and edit a few things which may lead to a few more drafts but if not I will soon be posting my final trailer with all the edited parts etc.